#writetip When editing a scene, as you read, picture it playing out like a movie. Did you capture everything well-enough on the page you see in your minds reel? Is the emotion there/translating (important!)? Have you given enough attention to secondary characters to round it out?

#writetip When editing a scene, as you read, picture it playing out like a movie. Did you capture everything well-enough on the page you see in your minds reel? Is the emotion there/translating (important!)? Have you given enough attention to secondary characters to round it out?

— HerringAli

#writetip When editing a scene, as you read, picture it playing out like a movie. Did you capture everything well-enough on the page you see in your minds reel? Is the emotion there/translating (important!)? Have you given enough attention to secondary characters to round it out?

— Ali Herring (@HerringAli) May 14, 2021